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NikonD70

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Fantastic Hunnie as always hehe :) its always the eyes i tell you :p

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hi there,

i will just tell my thoughts, not such a good composition here. I would try that you turn your face more to the light of the window.

Not showing there inside the curtains and empty wall. trying to gain more window and maybe part from outside... cuz i can see bricks outside there. might be nice.

And i think the camera would be better on a eye-to-eye level or if you want from the top.. than higher.

These are just some thought and my opinions. :)

best regards from poland!
:iconalexios78:
I totally agree with "EagleWye666666".

Apart from that I really like the contrast between the blond hair and the ble cutain. If the bricks are more in the picture, I see a superb contrast :)
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ty!

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:iconfemketje:
well i did make some shots with more view on the outside but it's kind of a dump in that garden XD so shots with garbadge in it aren't that nice XD

but thanks for the tips, i will def. work with them and see what i can do :)

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thankies!

i just love those curtains.. i also had a pink one but my boyfriend threw it away >.< that kinda sucks because if i have more curtains like these the shots would have more colour-variety in them.. maybe i'll look for some other colours in the shop later these weeks :)

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:iconfemketje:
but what do you think about the first shot then?

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:iconeagleeye666666:
oh well i see. so maybe not the complete view from outside.. a bit more of the brick wall there. face turning.. eye-level.

here she is to a lot at the bottom of the scene and to a lot not important stuff to see. do you know what i mean?

But hej iam also not a professional or sth. :D as you can see in my gallery. iam quite bad in portait shooting :D hehe
iam just sharing my thoughts and ideas + my freaky opinion.
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lol XD thanks anyway, it's always good to hear different people's opinion so you can only try and learn more..

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